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1/9/11

In the shadow of steel

Admiration of a laced hand
moved him to kiss delicate webbing
on the streets of Paris
where she, embarrassed, giggles
and he blows up like a frog
with the spoils of her taste
lingering on his tongue.

12 comments:

liv2write2day said...

Missy, you bring this short scene to life. Very well written. I hope to read more of your work.

Jingle said...

love it.

stunning imagery.

A++

Baron's Life said...

Missy...you, my Missy are a very talented Lady and one day you will be published and recognized world wide as a very fine talented artist. great work. I love it...keep'em coming

fiveloaf said...

great- just great! you manage to capture that moment on the street beautifully! here’s my new year potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/

Shadow said...

perfect!

drmadangoyal said...

Well captured scene.
True love may taste a little different.

Missy said...

Thank you all for commenting. I've been trying to draw more imagery into my writes.

I appreciate all your thoughts.

moonlitpoetic said...

As delicate and beautiful as butterfly wings...

trollpants said...

"Blows up like a frog"
Wonderful!

KB said...

I love the way you write x

Jingle said...

Potluck Week 17 Treat/Awards 4 You, Enjoy!



hope you well, busy like crazy, thanks for the tolerance.

TALON said...

A perfect moment plucked out of time and beautifully written...

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