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12/11/10

We'll be fine.

The storm was atrocious
oh how it poured,
flooded and wrecked
slammed against emotional doors.

So many times I waved for a line,
you'd let me drown each and every time.
How could I cope, another assault?
How would i make it, was it my fault?

One day it stopped...the emotional rains,
I'd wised up, you were never the same.
Your taunts were like laughter,
which rolled from my lips
You stood there silent, I wouldn't relent.

Now out the door suitcase in hand,
out on your own you worthless man.
I'm okay, so is your son, we are afloat
and you're a drowning son of a gun.

10 comments:

gs batty said...

it's time for the boot when you get fed up...wave bye bye and push him into the rain.

KB said...

Yes, you'll both be fine...you have each other.

articlesoffaithandfancy said...

"Slammed against emotional doors" gives such a powerful image. At least she wised up. Too bad he didn't.

Jingle said...

good news,
Glad to see you do fine..

Jingle said...

sorry for missing your online game.


if you wish to be part of poets rally week 35, come on in..
Blessings..
Hope you well..

scentofmyheart said...

Intense, menaingful writing. Of course you will be fine, if you have the strength to say with words, you will find a strentgh to be well for your son! Good job!

I'd like to wish you and your family a Merry Christmas, to say thank you for the support to Jingle Poetry, with you standing beside us, we are able to continue our efforts by providing the platform for poets who share and encourage...BEST wishes for the year 2011...your poetry has enlightened our community and made us smile.

Blessings fly your way, Happy Holidays!

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

Hope to see you on Sunday Poetry Potluck again, let me know if you have questions..old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome..

week 15 theme: reflections, interpretations, and musings.

Keep writing such beautiful poems, take care, always!

Jingle Poetry said...

Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

Link up to 3 poems to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

David Allen Waters said...

emotional storms are always so powerful...changing us every time.

gospelwriter said...

Yes, you'll be fine. Nice poem.

Promising said...

Please feel free to take the awards in the post , share each award with 1 to 10 friends,

Awards 4 u, Merry Christmas

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