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7/25/09

Hidden

What lies within her eyes is hidden;
hidden by eyelids sheltered behind a shade,
a shade which protects her from the sun.

The sun warms her through the shade,
a shade which hides her from view.
Like the eyelids shade what's hidden within her eyes.

5 comments:

lostmermaid said...

partial loop poetry !! and i loved it ... u have a beautiful blog :)

Missy said...

Thanks for the comment. I wanted to try a repetitive progression of word and thought. It was a first for me. :)

Megha said...

Nice work.

in another lifetime said...

Hello, this is my first visit to your blog. I found you through Westering. This poem is so clever and pleasing. I'm off to read more!
Sheila

Missy said...

Megha - Thank you so much for your comment

In another lifetime - thank you so much for coming over. I hope you stop by again.

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