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7/18/08

Birth (Acrostic)

Beginning of life
Incredibly sweet.
Resolved as a mother to
Treasure this precious cargo.
Humbled by life's greatest adventure.

12 comments:

Pen Me A Poem said...

Welcome to Poetry Prompt Melissa. :)

You invoke the most precious gifts a mother can give her baby. Love and protection. Very beautiful. Nice structure too with the initial letters.

SignGurl said...

Simply beautiful!! You are so talented, Missy.

Have a great weekend!

Missy said...

Thank you pen, I am looking forward to many more poetry prompts.

Jenn- Thanks for stopping by and thank you for such a lovely comment.

KB said...

Beautiful as always. I haven't done an acrostic for ages. Will have to have a go xxxx

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Love the simplicity here . . .

Thanks for your comments at NICKERS and INK.

Blessings,
Linda

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Craver Vii said...

Thanks for visiting, and leaving a nice comment.

I like the way this acrostic conveys instinctive maternal nurture. I always thought I loved kids until I became a dad. Then, I realized that I only "liked" kids before. Something happened the first time in that delivery room, and I felt a unique bond with my newborn.

I've never been much of a poet. I'm the kind of guy that thinks Haiku is something you do to earn a black belt. ;-)

Missy said...

Thank you everyone for stopping by. I enjoy your comments!!!

Hope your weekend will be a good one.

Nunyaa said...

Simple but the message is so clear, This definitely appeals to the mother in myself. Great work Missy.

Rio said...

Something so complex as maternal love is elegantly conveyed in the simplicity of your short acrostic. Very nice write!

gameover709 said...

great job!

jorc
empty garden

Lirone said...

Simple and sweet!

Marja said...

Wow you expressed so much in these few words

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